Blind

• Artist: Madame Ravissant
• Description: I really don't know how this poem came about. I just felt like writing it (:
• Date: 03/23/2009
• Tags: blind love

Little whispers in my ear
"Darling, darling,
Have no fear.
For I have seen the tears you've shed
sobbing, screaming
In your bed
Love has come your way
I have no doubt
A passionate young man has come about
You fell in love
It was simply clear
That you were love struck
It's fine, my dear
You were disappointed to find out
That another woman has come about
So you kissed him goodbye,
And you began to cry.
Inside you knew you regretted him
Right from the start
For your were blind, foolish one
Deep inside he loved you
You could of won."

Comments

[Madame Ravissant]

Thanks. Yeah, it was a bit hard to write. Couldn't think of things to rhyme.

[angel41791]

It's pretty good. There were a couple of times where it seemed pretty stressed, but I like it! 4/5