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WONDERING ABOUT OBSCURITY
wondering about
the page
the heart's blood black lettering
the words' 'milling without' meaning
the belles that won't let her ring
wondering about
the verses
the vices the pro uses
the rhymes, sometimes, not others
the passions fruit this produces
wondering about
the epitaphs
the caustic tackle of fishermen to be
the death's, unscrambled, eggs on
the readers guessing if it's meant to be
wondering about
the endings
the profundity lost where no funds grow
the tears in tears that fell out, put down
the all factory goose plucking contest
the consequential output down
and the ends
anti ends
intends
- Title: Wondering About Obscurity
- Artist: UC Poika
- Description: Obscure meanderings ended abruptly for they may have continued forever.
- Date: 03/26/2009
- Tags: wondering about obscurity
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Jerryboam - 03/31/2009
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good wordsmithing
coherent
know what you're saying - Report As Spam
- FuriazFTW - 03/27/2009
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Uh... well, it's obscure, that's for sure.
...the spelling kind of killed it for me. You spelled obscurity wrong in the title, lol.
I didn't understand this poem, and it seems like it was just a bunch of sentences thrown together...
Sorry, but I'm only going to rate this one a 2/5. (I'm not trying to be harsh or anything, please don't be too angry with me.) - Report As Spam