Alone With You

• Artist: Yami416
• Description: A poem about being alone with something you love that's dreadful.
• Date: 03/30/2009
• Tags: alone with

Dedicated to Nesibe and my best friend Ian

Finally when I break away and feel like I'm set free,
the lonely feelings of being without you creep back up on me.
This darkness you have placed in me is too hard to encase.
And fighting isn't worth if I can not see your face.

Your smile and careless comments helped me shine for all to see.
Without you here to help me, I just leave the dark to be.
I've never been so lonely in my entire life.
But I am not alone since I have the endless night.

This darkness you have placed in me has made a home inside.
And everytime I think of you the darkness comes alive.
I have no will to walk the earth, so I just cease to breathe.
And I'd give anything to see your face before I leave.

Your absence made me empty and placed me in arms of death.
And I refuse to breathe since you stole my only breath.
This darkness you have placed in me is the only ghost of you.
And since you're not around the darkness just will have to do.

And I have never felt so lonely in my entire life.
But I am not alone since I have your endless night.

Comments

[l BeautifulxOblivion l]

I really like it.^^

[Nurse Katherine]

i agree that is deep....i do sense a little bit of realtion but its very intreging.

[Miekka Kuoleman]

wow, that was really deep. also i think i can relate with that poem and thats what you want the reader to feel. a sense or relation. good job 5/5