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As time goes
We'll forget woes
Every lie
causes someone to cry
Every false smile
does the same
it's only purpose to beguile
Has all this fame
gotten to your head?
I could be dead
and you wouldn't know it
if you notice me
you never show it
Me, you never see
I believed you
I can't believe I did
I should've known it wasn't true
Now my heart is frozen solid
Goodbye
Now leave...you will not see me cry
- Title: Goodbye
- Artist: Shuri Umi
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- Date: 04/01/2009
- Tags: goodbye
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Shuri Umi - 04/22/2009
- oh great. there's 2!
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- Captain_Axiom - 04/13/2009
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I can't stand being apart from you! I NEED YOU LIKE A GOOD BREAD NEEDS A GOOD BASE!
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- Captain_Axiom - 04/13/2009
- Good suicide note. Except for your blatant overuse of sucking. And the word Woe for some strange reason. It's bad. Really bad.
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- Mortedraconus - 04/04/2009
- good. Rime scheme a little iffy, but good for free forming. Good conveyance of direct meaning.
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