ThE FuTuRe?

• Artist: b0ld_lies x3
• Description: i made this poem because of what might be going on, but i dont really know fer sure lol
• Date: 04/02/2009
• Tags: future

Sometimes, i feel left out, always wondering why.
Every day, looking out at that blue sky.
I'm always lookin out to the next day behind the other, looking for the things i enjoy.
Standing out in public, but i don't care, there's many things, i want to share.
Any time? Any space?
There's many mistakes to erase.
Before you go on, think about the others.
Look who made this, fathers, mothers, sisters and brothers.
Enjoy the future, live whats now, think about the past and ask me how.
Can you change the world?
Can you change what you see?
But can you change..who YOU want to be?

Comments

[Chryssandra_Leia]

Love the last line though: "But can you change... who YOU want to be?" instead of it being "what you you want to be" it's WHO... maybe you could emphasize more on the WHO instead of 'you' but it's still nice.