Don't need you

• Artist: KatieCliche
• Description:
• Date: 04/05/2009
• Tags: love relationships boyfriends pain

I couldn't eat
I couldn't sleep
I couldn't laugh
just cried and cried

did you forget
each time you held me
said you cared
just lied and lied?

when you kissed me
then you killed me
twisted something
deep inside

so when you struck
I bled forever
crimson tears that
never dried

well I
don't need you to make it
never gonna fake it
baby won't you go and get out now
I don't need you to run and I
don't need you to hide and I
don't need you to bring me down

voices in the dead of night are
sending shivers down my spine
but i don't miss your plastic smile
lips and skin like turpentine
I gave you everything I had
would you love me, love me dead?

well i
don't need you to make it
never gonna fake it
baby won't you go and get out now
I don't need you to run and I
don't need you to hide and I
don't need you to bring me down

don't need you to make it
never gonna fake it
baby won't you go and get out now
(right now)
I don't need you to run and I
don't need you to hide and i
don't need you to bring me down

Comments

[iloveblanketyblank]

My favorite line is "crimson tears that never dried", it's very descriptive and gave it a poetic touch. In the future you should write more lines like that. wink It makes the writing more original, describing crying in a way that no one's heard before.

[Sunafire]

Eh, it's a bit cliche and over-done if you ask me.
There are some nice rhymes in there though.

[kitty992]

wow surprised