Poor Skies

• Artist: XM The SpeedRunner
• Description: Ok, so basically this is my first Senryu. The theme of this senryu is sadness. The story to this senryu is a young, sensitive man is starting to feel sorrowful after experiencing a really serious hardship. As he looks out the window of his house, he starts to feel remorseful as the clouds turn gray. I'm not looking to make this some sort of "emo" senryu, but it's basically a senryu aimed towards those who are going through some hard times in their lives.
• Date: 04/05/2009
• Tags: poor skies

Remorse starts to stir
As Lady Gray begins to
Paint the cold, white skies

Comments

[superaku]

Simply amazing. I have gone through a series of hardships in my life...and this Senryu really spoke to me. Thank you.5/5