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i'm like a doll that's missing pieces
a broken doll that can't be fixed
a defect
people pass me in the hall
and i pass them
are they invisible
or am i?
am i needed,
am i necessary,
the world dosen't care,
who lives or who dies,
great men and women
mothers, fathers, and childern
us
thats why people search for each other,
i can't seem to find my person,
So i should just lay down and
cry
- Title: "Me"
- Artist: Tasikumi
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Description:
this is about me. and that's about it...
a person on my friends list had taken it even though they called it 'broken doll'
even though only like 2 lines express the broken doll part... - Date: 04/07/2009
- Tags: doll broken sadness
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Kira_Saikosai - 01/07/2010
- wish i could give u another 5/5 lol every time i read this i think its amazing <3
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- Kira_Saikosai - 12/20/2009
- totally read "some closure" i think u may like it
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- NakedJack - 04/12/2009
- This reminds me of Drowning in Desire, a poem I just submitted. You should check it out lol Its written well, a nice read. I always complain about poems like these, but I shouldn't. Its how you feel, even though you understand you aren't worth any less than any one else, value is subjective, you feel that way. Don't like the reference image though.
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- Kira_Saikosai - 04/09/2009
- wow, this is great. it reminds me of a poem i just submitted called frozen child, u should check it out. totally awesome 5/5
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