Friendship

• Artist: ii_Cookii-Monsterr
• Description: This is about friendship.
• Date: 04/08/2009
• Tags: friendship love

Friendship is something to hold on to
But for me that's not the case
Cause I don't feel I need to keep
Something that can't be erased

I am sure of what I have
Cause with you I have no doubt
For what we've built, can't ever fail
It's what I care about

I find it hard to describe
This thing that we share
Especially when there's nothing else
That ever could compare

Others always know
That together we will be
For there can never be another
You an Me

Those two words, known all over
Might as well be one
Cause without a Kerrie, there is no Tani
I'm sorry, it just can't be done

For you're the "U", and I'm the "S"
And forever that will be
Cause together we make "US", and so
YOU COMPLETE ME!!

Comments

[Llywelyn Fawr]

Decent poem. Is it center aligned for a reason? Also, it might be a good idea to not make some of the lines start with an upper case letter. Also, I would add some punctuation. Finally, you don't need exclamation marks at the end. Instead you should try and make it so that the exclamation marks are understood. Good start but it looks like you're an amateur. Even if you are, you don't want other people to know that.