New Waves

• Artist: clumsy-story of my life
• Description: well, this didn't take me to long to write because i had the idea in my head for a couple of days. I haven't written any poems for a little while so i hope this is good. Be tough! I want lots of constructive critism (probably spelled that wrong, sorry it's late at night ^.^)
• Date: 04/09/2009
• Tags: waves

An ocean of wonder
Each wave bringing something new
The tide is my future
Just waiting to come in
The beach is my past
Every grain of sand a memory
Something I can always hold onto and remember
A dawning day
Brings in new waves
And a new tide
Along with a new future
While new grains of sand are made
Collecting on the beach
Where I can always look back and remember

Comments

[scitama]

Metaphor is great! This was all-around a good piece of writing cool

[cutie_pie714]

i like that one