Emptyness

• Artist: fireball6669
• Description: This is about a girl that is kidnapped and is put in a dark room all by herself.
• Date: 04/10/2009
• Tags: emptyness

As i sit in the darkness all night and day
And cry in loneliness to my eyes burned.
Looking around there's nothing in sight
No light just darkness absolute emptyness.
Then the door begin to open and in shine the outside.
Standing there in front of me is a man that smiled so kindly.
He took my hand into his they where warm and soft
Then said to me " Come you be able to wonder freely
See things you wouldn't see regularly
And live a happy life with me."
Nodding my hand I stood up to go
But in a blink of an eye his hand turned cold.
The smile was gone left by a smirk
Letting out an evil laugh he push me back
"You are the stupidest thing i see
To thing i would let yo go with me.
You have to face the facts no one is kind.
So when you stop crying and trust no one you can come with me
And with that i was left in the darkness
With nothing in sight no light just emptyness.

Comments

[livingdespitedeath]

this is a piece seems highly...personal...i think it couldve been better...but it was pretty good to think that sometimes what you wrote is true is one of the saddest things i know.

[talk to ya girl 11]

not so good and im a poet