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Work is what keeps us going.
It's like how water keeps the earth snowing.
Fun keeps us smiling and happy.
It keeps us from being mad and snappy.
Mayhem is what keeps us on our toes.
It makes sure we are always guessing and never knows.
If life wasen't hard it would just be boring.
Its what keeps us mad and ingnoring.
Its that thing that keeps us guessing,happy,exciting,causous,overcoming&different.
- by MATT-ELF-REAPER |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/13/2009 |
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- Title: WHAT,S LIFE WITHOUT?
- Artist: MATT-ELF-REAPER
- Description: life with out fun,hardships,work,challenges,and a little mayhem isen't life because its just boring.
- Date: 04/13/2009
- Tags: whats life without
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- Kagome Takeda - 04/21/2009
- Good concept! I believe what animegunner was making a note of was that you back and forth between past tense, and present tense, or possibly the odd rhyme scheme? But personaly not bad! I think you did a good job.
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- Idiosyncratic Quirk - 04/17/2009
- I hope one day you'll edit this. I like the concept but something about it is odd to me.
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