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A breath of wind through his chestnut hair
Sends me reeling in his rich, sweet scent.
Fit together in eachother’s arms,
Like a jigsaw sprawled on the warm grass.
One word comes to mind:
Home.
- by Happy Flavors |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/15/2009 |
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Comments (3 Comments)
- areyououthere - 06/08/2009
- weak in delivery (not much that supports one another) and the fact that this has already been done (and way better) and thus turning this into a cliche MAKES me think you have yet to learn the BASICS of poetry; refine that and your poetry level WILL increase.
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- Rain8ow - 04/18/2009
- so sweet <3
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- Naruto_Uzimaki1010 - 04/16/2009
- nice poem thingy. its cool.
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