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I see you and know,
You are the one,
So I ask for a date.
You accept.
Oh the joy I have in me
Like opening tired eyes on Christmas
Waiting in the movies
You appear
Entering the building
We sit down
Side by side
You smile
Spotting someone
Not known by my eyes
Sitting all alone
You stand up
Waiting and waiting
I ponder and linger
Not knowing you left me
You vanish
I go back home
With my broken heart’s
Sluggish beating
You slayed me
I scream and weep
Not facing the facts
Not facing the truth
You slaughtered me
- by Erde Vormund |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/18/2009 |
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- Title: Deception
- Artist: Erde Vormund
- Description: In 9th grade i asked a girl out but it didn't turn out as planned.
- Date: 04/18/2009
- Tags: deception
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Liz-z MCRmy - 04/21/2009
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wow that sucks
4/5 cuz im very generious - Report As Spam
- yaVaho155 - 04/18/2009
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aw man crap!
you have a simple, but effective writing style.
Keep it up! this is worth a 3.5 (3 since I'm a very critical person, but you worked for it!) - Report As Spam