Alone

• Artist: Ess Tee Eff Yuu
• Description: Woow...I haven't done this in a while. Dx Anyway, it's a sort of song thing I wrote, but I guess you could just call it a poem since there's no music put to it yet. I'd like a little feedback, and don't tell me it's just "bad." That doesn't help me improve, now does it?
• Date: 04/18/2009
• Tags: alone

It's cold out tonight.
Are you warm?
Inside by the fire?
Would you let me in?
I'm out here alone,
And it's cold out.

It's dark out tonight,
Or is it day?
Now that your light's gone,
I will never know.
I'm out here alone,
And it's dark out.

I'm still here you know,
I won't fade back into scenery.
Waiting,
Always waiting,
I'm out here alone,
Dead.

Comments

[senribear]

Wow... that's really nice. Death seems to be the topic around here, but htis one is really nice!