Forgotten Key

• Artist: Rebelette
• Description: I'm in a poetry mood today.
• Date: 04/22/2009
• Tags: forgotten keys love

Hello there, old forgotten key.
If you could hear and you could see,
Would you tell me what you locked?

You must be missing them dearly so,
Your partner's lost and yet I know
Your love has never stopped.

I know that you must have been
In love and that we are akin.
To lose the one we love is just insane.

So, I'll wear your metal on my breast,
And hopefully you'll be at rest
Knowing I strive to find our loves again.

Comments

[midnightangelforever]

I absolutely love it. The stanza's flow from one to the other perfectly. The story it tells is easy to understand, but at the same time thought provoking. I have a key I wear around my neck, and this makes me think about it in a whole new light. Love the new idea you presented in this. Awesome!

[D0n3_W3Th]

3nodding This is deep. I like the fact that a key is used as a tool for love. This is awesomely deep!