blood is thicker than water

• Artist: hikari xx MULE
• Description: okae well i jus made this up i was actually watching bloodchocolate and i thought i'd write a poem on blood and water and etc. anyway i dont kno if it's any good but plz vote!! and plz tell me wat i can do make it better!!
• Date: 04/22/2009
• Tags: dark light

blood is thicker than water...
though the darkness in ones heart shines..
together we shall banish this light..
well cut ourselves from this world
and let our blood flow...
for we are not the makers..
we are followers..of this race..
this human race we are so bound
our words will not be in vain..
there will be people
who will fight through this light
no pain can measure the pain we feel inside
our pain will be our burden to bare
this light heart we have..
we do not need it..
darkness will light up our body and soul
for blood is thicker than water...and we will never let it stop flowing..

Comments

[sweet black kitty kat]

...more flow...bit'o ryming helps...