Magic Trick

• Artist: PoeticWindstorm
• Description: lets just say............i was very depressed :D lol please enjoy and feel free to comment.......but plz.......no haters; if u dont like it just move on.......thank u! ^-^
• Date: 04/25/2009
• Tags: magic trick

I hate you for what you've done to me You're the everlasting eternity You're the soule of scrutiny Yet you define me with all that is wrong. You're why i hate all that is here Why i feel an end is near For what was done to me, you cheer sad Now with a knife, here I am. A knife for a life is what I say A good trick, now watch your life fade away. As you slifp from this place you stutter and stray, "Did you have to do this to me; must i die?!?" I whisper, "true but my hate for you is no lie; for me to live, you shall die."

Comments

[Inyuashi 23]

Now this, this is wonderful. It portrays things quite well, the feeling is quite nice and the manor in which you adressed things is nice (although I sort of covered that by saying it portrayed them well). For all this, I give you 5/5

[PoeticWindstorm]

in case anyone is wonderin.........yes, i did spell "soul" wrong in the poem on purpose XD its supposed to have a double meaning lol