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I lie in bed awake
cant sleep
fearing of seeing you in my dreams
finally i drift away
i dream of you holding
dont want to wake
i want to stay
but soon i know i have to wake
my sobs awake me from the dream
in reality you're not next to me
i know i wont see you again
only here in my dreams
my memory of you will have to fade
but i dont want to let it leave
ill say goodbye to you forever
goodbye, goodbye, ill see you never
- by Twilight Monkey |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/26/2009 |
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- Title: Dream
- Artist: Twilight Monkey
- Description: A poem I wrote. Tell me what you think please.
- Date: 04/26/2009
- Tags: dream poem brokenlove goodbye
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Ohh Damn Its Anne - 05/08/2009
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Great!
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- Twilight Monkey - 05/08/2009
- Thanks you guys! you're awsome! I appreciate the coments. biggrin
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- LOVABLE_PIE34 - 05/08/2009
- OmG DiS PoEm Is aWsOMe!!!! ii LuV U!!!=]
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- edab4456 - 04/30/2009
- :]] they thought u were a proffessional :00 ur a good writer/poetry person :]] biggrin okay enuff wiff the smilies.. I LIKE TI biggrin OHGOD ITS A SMILIE OKAY. but i really do like it.
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- SparkTacular - 04/28/2009
- Oh my... thats sad... I mean, it is a very well written poet and as the past comment said, it sounds professional. It is just very sad and expresses a miserable point of view. The author is very creative. But this is a true story so I would have to say that it is very well written.
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- Dragon565333 - 04/27/2009
- It's Soo good It's better than what I wrote! Omg! Are you a professenal?! It's wonderful!
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