dance on the floor

• Artist: IlIPhsycotic Rampagelll
• Description: i was thnkin of someone and wrote this poem,
• Date: 04/28/2009
• Tags: dance floor

we dance on the floor,
our feet moving to the beat
i feel the rythm in my mind
i drift away in the music
im lost in a sea of dreams,
i only thnk of u and me
the way we move
always together, never apart
we sway, from side to side
every moment, is breath taking
i stumble and fall,
but ur there to catch me
u take my hand
and guide me thru,
i can thelp but b nervous
when im around u
but u make me feel
so special inside,
like whe we dance on the floor
our feet moving to the beat

Comments

[SmileyCasper]

Not to be mean or anything, I think you should work on your spelling a little bit more. People notice those small details and they tend to critize. I like the whole idea of the poem, but it would be better if the whole thing was written correctly. 3/5

[belle9090]

what a wonderful poem a beautful poem one of the best poems i ever read