a poem as if i were there

• Artist: baily65555
• Description: i i had to write a poem about hitler for bonus
• Date: 04/29/2009
• Tags: poem were there

heart A poem written as if i were there heart

a wonderful game of remembering
the past,
hanging out with friends
and having a blast,
i dreamed of the future,
and what lied ahead,
i had to keep myself sturdy,
or wind up dead.
i had to find a way out of this range,
and i found a journal,
and in it,
this blank page.
im filling it with thoughts of fear,
and losing those were close and dear.

the scearming of voices that were all very near,
and to think that some peolpe just stood there to cheer!
the nerve of some peolpe!
they don't even care!
they make it seem like were not even there
we have lost so many,
during our fight.
dont these peolpe know whats wrong,
AND WHATS RIGHT?

Comments

[Lady Gwendolynn O Danaan]

There are some minor spelling errors. You might try getting someone else to proof read your work before you submit something else next time. Other than that it was fairly good and I liked. 4/5