Child + Canine

• Artist: Angel in Wonderland
• Description: Mwahahahahaha I know all of you prolly hate this but hey, this took a lot of f-ing work! :P
  It's a sextuple haynaku with constant alliteration, you try writing one that makes sense!
  Hahahahaha C's gone wild!
• Date: 05/07/2009
• Tags: haynaku alliteration

Child's chosen,
collie chaperon,
cuddly, collard chum

Creating copper
castles, 'cross
Californian coastlines

Colliding close
carefully, clutching
calico canine companion

Crying, catastrophic
carcinogen, causing
cancerous cardiovascular changes

Crucial concoction
charitably conferred
conserving childhood comrade

Camping cove
currently, continuously,
containing cute cohorts

Comments

[Llywelyn Fawr]

Nice rhythm! Sounds childish (as in doesn't sound like your a serious poet), but its hard to make a great poem with such strict rules. I recommend you write free verse until you can write a great poem with meter and rhyme and all that stuff.