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This lantern can’t be seen through the thick haze
The flickering flame clings for survival,
There are so many paths and so many ways
It seems there’s just no chance of revival.
And billowing winds block out all sound
So a tear that is shed can’t be seen
A gentle hand to hold is never found,
None is acknowledged for being so keen.
A simple pleasure cannot be enjoyed,
For one is consumed with stress and worry.
Danger is far too near for one to avoid;
Only so little time for such a hurry.
But there is another light so very near
That pulls me away from the danger and fear.
- by icyblueroses137 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/10/2009 |
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- Title: A Midnight Walk
- Artist: icyblueroses137
- Description: This is a poem I wrote for a poetry project one year.
- Date: 05/10/2009
- Tags: midnight walk
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Comments (2 Comments)
- aliasJaneDoe - 05/17/2009
- The only suggestion that I have to give, is think about breaking it up a bit, because as a visual presentation, it just looks like a huge block of text, which can be fairly daunting and hard to follow. Other than that, it was awesome!!!
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