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I lie here
In the grass
With you watching
The time pass.
It seems so dark because it's
Nighttime;
But I feel your heart glow a radiant
Light
I'm feeling the rush as the wind goes by,
Surrounded by cold
And fireflies.
Sense the constellations
As they slowly say
"Goodbye";
Hear the song of crickets
In the wood
(I love their serenade).
I forget that every blade
Is sliding through my skin;
Inflicting wounds so thin
I feel their pang of tiny pain.
Yet I don't care,
You feel the same
(We close our eyes.)
The cloudless skies;
The stars arise.
A view is shown,
So full of drama.
A light show seen
In panorama.
A rain of meteors:
[One and two.]
The wishes made
Have now come true.
We said so little
(But said so much)
A veil between us
Just needs our touch.
And we sit tight;
And we lie down;
It's hard to think
We're still in town
Inside your yard.
(We still could be
Just think real hard.)
The leaves, they danced
The prancing deer
The wildlife watched as I got
Near you.
So quiet that I can barely hear
You blow the head;
Now the dandelion seeds
Go travel up north
To the land it receives.
They shower above us
You picked a flower
Said "I love us."
Then another whisper
And off they go;
Flying away and
Falling like snow
They sprayed off into
Their departure.
(I'm slowly feeling
The beat
Of your heart.)
You're letting this out:
A breath of fresh air
I still can't believe that you
Are still there
Lie awake
Still alive
To my nebulous dream...
We start shouting aloud
To this feeling extreme!
A breeze so cool [they freeze my tears]
A love so strong they chase my fears
Away
And sky starts turning night to day...
Right now it just feels so okay
To stay
To lie and wait
From dusk to dawn:
We stay awake.
As the sun says hello
And the birds belt a tune
They glide all around
(Gold, yellow, maroon.)
And it's so sad
To say
That darn word so soon
We were a thousand miles away
Yet were still in town
[The daylight receives
It's auroral crown]
A peck on the cheek
"Goodbye, little miss"
Then we held our breath
For a passionate kiss.
- by rubberbend |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/12/2009 |
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- Title: I Lie With You
- Artist: rubberbend
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Description:
I have always wanted to make the poem about a couple under the stars on the grass, but never had the guts to do it. Or the brains. Hehe.
I have no clue what category ths goes under.
Been practicing on free and fixed verse poetry, so I think this goes under "fail".
BRAinFAil :P - Date: 05/12/2009
- Tags: love couple
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Comments (3 Comments)
- shaggy_girl94 - 11/29/2009
- it's pretty good work
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- Dragon_Master_Jaganshi - 08/21/2009
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that's really good ^^ keep it up 5/5
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- KhairiRaiin - 08/01/2009
- wow thats soooo amazing!! you have the beesssttt talent ive evvveeerrr seen!
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