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Tolerate without blind escape routes
These paths may cross and destroy
Maneuver the way to paradise
- by WereSquishy |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/12/2009 |
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- Title: Haiku
- Artist: WereSquishy
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- Date: 05/12/2009
- Tags: haiku
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- WereSquishy - 08/03/2010
- Paradise is considered nature at times. And you mean Haikus or they can't be spelled by "s" then.
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- 2pound - 08/03/2010
- besides the lack of the syllable structure, there's no mention of anything about or of nature; haiku are about nature, and this is not.
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- Haiizel Nut - 05/18/2009
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Is that a haiku isnt it 7 silibles
then 5 then 7? UGH SORRY I ACTUAL
Think its really awsome actually <//3 - Report As Spam
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