locked pages

• Artist: tobiwants2cookies
• Description: another semi depressing poem of awesomeness comment please
• Date: 05/15/2009
• Tags: locked pages

My soul
It used to be an open book
ready for anyone to see

But through the years
of ridicule
and reprimands

It is firmly closed
and locked away

So I can't
be shamed

For the things
that make me...
me

To keep me safe
I did this

but all that happened
was an overflowing dam
of pent up emotions

And now the lock
is broken

The pages torn

And the shaming
begins anew
as a torrent of rain

drenching the pages of my soul

Comments

[Voo to the doo]

I used a shakesphere word redress = to correct or remedy. Embarrassed.

[Voo to the doo]

...And when I feel so angry that I could spite the world. I see the innocents who don't need to build a covering for themselves; even myself from the past. And, for me at least, I'm calmed. They are the future and I was the future in the past. How can the world be so bad if there is innocence? I just wish it could stay simple, but no, life just gets more and more complex as we age. I redress...I think too much.

[WorIds]

i love this poem it's really good 5/5 for u!

[jOmUnK aKa jOeY]

thats poetry the world realy is ******** up

[tobiwants2cookies]

I totally agree that's why I love rebuking it
SCREW YOU WORLD

[raistlins_daughter]

yeah I know how THAT feels. what a f*****d up world we live in, eh?