sad emo poem

• Artist: 2Dandmansonsgalpoison
• Description: ya this is me so sorry and no ******** hate mail people you are so getting annoying with that leave the damned emo alone sweet ******** satan
• Date: 05/18/2009
• Tags: poem

I look at my wrist
It has not a single eye
If it even had one
My wrist would cry

I pick up my razor
Look at that too
It reflects my face
I shed a tear, boohoo

I think back at my life
All the painful years
In front of the mirror
I broke out in tears

My mom knocks on the door
She asks what is up
I pray to the heavens
I don't ******** this up

I put the razor to my skin
Will it hurt a lot?
I start cutting...
Damn, I forgot!

I recall a phrase
A meaningful load
Go down the street
Not across the road

Comments

[vanessaw14]

cool. i like it. but dont let the chains of rhyme affect your free write. i mean rhymes are cool. i like them. but you dont always have to

[The Marvelous Joshua]

It's good, I've been through the same stuff too =[
But, I always though you should cut across, not down, but oh well.
Good poem, quite deep, I like it

[lovergurl497]

its good but you should try poems without all the rhyming stuff.....let your words run free on your page(:

[HERS_FOREVER]

it is sweet