when angles die

• Artist: matty the videogame man
• Description: another poem i thought of writing , and then came to be.
• Date: 05/25/2009
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when angles die people cry.
when angles die the world is without sanity ,
and filled with insanity.
when angles die ,
hell breaks loose.
love is destroyed.
hearts are broken and sewn back up with pain and hatred inside them.
people grow sad and depressed.
innocent people get hurt.
when angles die ,
the whole world and man kind its self dies with them.
that is what happens when angles die.

Comments

[Arkelle]

hmmm
I have to say that I like this poem very much. However, i think that you should work on over-wording and stanza seperation. I think if you made small adjustments to the format it could be awesome!
Keep it up! ^^