Emo Poetry

• Artist: Rivii
• Description: I don't know xD I'm not really depressed I just felt like writing this... >.> Critique is always loved!
• Date: 05/25/2009
• Tags: poetry

I write about love that will never be real
because I could never tell him how I really feel

I write about violence blood and gore
I write about that b***h whose a total whore

I write about darkness theres nothing but black
I write about "friends" that stabbed me in the back

I write about death, how it's better than life
I write about cutting, with that bloody knife

I write about sanity, who really is "sane"?
I write about school, how it's such a pain

I wirte about being heartless, we all know it's true
I write about blood, and how some of it's new

I write about my past, and what I've repressed
I write emo poetry because I'm depressed

Comments

[Scruffy_dog02]

Ah. . . not bad for a rhyming poem, but sometimes the rhymes seem a little too forced. The emotion behind the poem is also pretty impressive. Sometimes though, being clinically depressed isn't all just about darkness ( as you are not, but that's what I'm going through ) But anyway, good job smile