Useless

• Artist: Naya Merai
• Description: A depressing poem I wrote a few years ago
• Date: 05/25/2009
• Tags: useless

I'm the equal of a broken toy,
Once you break it, it has no uses.
So then it gets thrown out
and a new one is bought.
Although a new person cannot be bought,
Therefore if I'm useless
I'll never be wanted.

That is correct,
no one will ever want me.
Everyday people ask me,
"Why are you so stupid?"
And I think to myself,
I have no purpose.
I am useless,
Why keep me around?

Why don't you get rid of me?
Just like a broken toy,
It isn't hard to find
Someone much better than me

Comments

[xXxCallixXx]

This poem lacks some emotional images. I can see you were trying to give off a hopeless of useless wibe but it only gave a whiney sense to it. I'd say add something more descriptive to it, add details. Its an amazing idea and there is so much more you can do to it.