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Hurtful words from the ones I love,
Care to share the thoughts above?
My mind wonders, pacing the moments without you,
But I wont make you choose,
You think you've made the right choice,
Thats good, Im glad your happy with yourself,
Working on my happiness,
Not working really well,
Sorry you got dragged into this,
I guess its farewell,
I have a secret,
Ive never told you dearest one,
Its the last night,
Hearts beat alive,
My heartbeats gone,
Soon so will the song,
Crying out into the night,
Burning with passion, I cant get out of this sight,
Kiss me,
Hold me,
No more,
Your gone, I fear forever more,
My eyes filling with tears and such,
This isn't me,
Who is this person I stare at in the mirror,
Who is that crying,
Certainly not me,
Must be my former self,
Ya, shes a bit nuts,
Crazy in love,
For someone she prayed for,
Does it look like she got her wish?
I guess she should have paid more,
He whisped her off her feet,
kissed her softly,
Never to be heard of him again,
I want him back,
Please, I beg of you,
My heart just died,
Killed inside,
I'll throw it out the window tell them to kiss my a**,
Its rebellious against the world,
Caressing my skin under your touch,
I long for more,
Dying now,
The bloods almost drained,
You could have saved me,
But that didn't matter,
I should have known better then believe,
It hurt last time,
Why not now?
can you help me understand!
I wish that I ment something,
Maybe to you or just him,
Someone who got me as well as I thought he use to,
I was wrong,
So very wrong,
Being the dame that called your beautiful name,
I just crashed down all around,
Kissing the ground as my heart fell from the sky and not caught by the naked eye,
Its time to sleep and I feel your innocence creep,
Good-bye pure heart,
your broken again,
and its all considered under the loss of him.
- Title: Lost again
- Artist: Suka_love
- Description: ...i havent the heart to write it at the moment.
- Date: 05/27/2009
- Tags: lost again
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Sweat_n_Sassy - 06/03/2009
- loved it darling i just loved it i'll rate 5/5 for ya its fabulous hehe sorry random critic moment
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- Macabre Forever - 05/29/2009
- Love is such a burden,why must we all inevitably suffer its wrath! sorry,ranting...I say 4/5 emotional content is always good.
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- Suka_love - 05/28/2009
- I agree, not one of my bests but hey its kinda like writing a secret love note you never knew you wanted to write, lol
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- Inyuashi 23 - 05/28/2009
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Hmmmm...Interesting.
Once more you convey a great deal of emotion, it's wonderful, it's a good poem. Yet I feel there's a flow missing, overall 4/5 - Report As Spam