my out look

• Artist: shadowfire313
• Description: don't call me emo!!!i'm just deep like this some times a it can be filled with sadness and darkness.
• Date: 05/30/2009
• Tags: livefreelistin

from light to darkness i see nothing but the same look,a hope...no a NEED to eat all infront of them,after you speak with your soul listin to the souls of all that you can hear,

feel ther joys and srowwos,then look on the line of good and evil and see as it disappers and as you read this feel ever word that i speak onto to and then look at the self you feel is to be you and ask "why do i walk?"

i only hope you can hear me before you are takein' over by your own shadow in light or dark.

Comments

[Mutandanstan]

suggestion time!(lolz) maybe put it into poetic form to add more drama to your poem and to also break it up so it is easier to read and less like a run on sentence.^^