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My head droped low on your breast
With a feeling of shelter
and infinite rest,
While the holy emotions
my tongue dared not speak,
Flashed up as in flame,
from my heart to my cheek;
Your arms held me fast,
in their passionate hold.
Heart beat against heart
Your glances seemed
drawing my soul through my eyes,
As the sun draws the
mist from the sea to the skies.
Your lips clung to mine
till I prayed in my bliss
They might never unclasp from this rapturous kiss.
- by CorruptBliss |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/02/2009 |
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- Title: The Kiss
- Artist: CorruptBliss
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- Date: 06/02/2009
- Tags: kiss
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Comments (2 Comments)
- thefartingspider - 03/02/2010
- great free form...good descriptions...i give it a 4...i would give it a 5...but i prefer rhyming poems..i just think it takes more effort to rhyme them..giving the last point...if you redo it with a rhyme scheme i will deffinatly give you a 5
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- Xxhells bloodxX - 06/02/2009
- usually when ppl rhyme in their poems it doesnt sound gewd but this flowed and went well sooooo gewd job *thumbs up*
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