now that its over

• Artist: Silencematters
• Description:
• Date: 06/04/2009
• Tags: over

now that its over now that its done
im going to foget going to have some fun

im better without you and i no longer cry
no longer cling,to what was always your lies

those pictures we took, those days that we spent
im never going to remember what they ment

you left me alone and you broke my heart
i dont even know how to start

but now that its done with, now that i see
you were never my one

you were never for me

Comments

[pikiio]

ok I like your emotion but don't just try to find words that ryme cause that just sounds like a really sad really long lymerick. try to find words that are as emotional as you feel and it helps if every line is around the same sylable (I know I cant spell) I'm not trying to be mean or anything I just think you will be really good someday and I wanna help you with that smile check out my poem "apostraphy to the ocean" smile