something

• Artist: twistedpersonality_0_0_
• Description: i listen to this song, after i broke up with my boyfriend... it's not all the lyrics, though if you want, i'll post the rest up...
• Date: 06/06/2009
• Tags: something

Something

so now you're running it's hard to see clearly
when i make you angry, your stuck in the past
and now your screaming, so can you forgive me
i've treated you badly, but i'm still here...

sometimes i wonder, why i'm still waiting
sometimes i'm shaking, that's how you make me
sometimes i question, why i'm still here, sometimes i think i'm going crazy..

can you help me understand!

and now you wish that you meant something...
and now you wish that you meant something to somebody else...

i see through your clouded eyes,
i know you see through my lies...
see the sky, see the stars,
all of this could be ours.
out of sight, out of mind,
we've been through this a thousand times..
turn your back and then you make me feel so crazy..

can you help me understand!

Comments

[twistedpersonality_0_0_]

this isn't mine.. i got it from a band i listen to called 'escape the fate'...

[atelltalesine]

i hate to be the grammar police but when you say "your stuck in the past," shouldn't it be "you're"?

you should try writing non rhyming, unstructured poetry. it gives you a lot more freedom. with your mastery of imagery other poetic devices, i think it would be an even better medium for you

[twistedpersonality_0_0_]

add some more tomorrow, i promise

[CrucioMeDarling]

I love it, put the rest up, it would make a lovely song. (:

[twistedpersonality_0_0_]

someone please comment on this...
i need someones honest opinion...