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11/3/06 – Expression
Expression is a connection,
A link and a vine,
That creeps out from one mind,
And then into five.
But the recoil and shock,
As the relentless do mock,
And the angered and motioned,
And moved do block,
My path in the light,
Let my way be in dark,
And my mind from my body,
And my mind from my heart.
And when the vine, it is severed,
And when the line, it is snapped,
And those hardened minds, they are weathered,
And those gentle hearts, they are cracked.
And my breath, it is frozen,
Caught choked in my throat,
And my words do I swallow,
Before past do they float,
Past my lips into air,
Through the currents to their ears.
- by rocko11091 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/07/2009 |
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- Title: Expression
- Artist: rocko11091
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This poem is one of my award-winning poems. I submitted it for, and was subsequently awarded the "Beaulieau Prize for Poetry." I hope it is as interesting for you to read, as it was for me to write.
As always, I request there be some constructive criticism in any comments. Just something like a specific part you liked about it, something you think could be improved...thats all. Thanks... - Date: 06/07/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- rocko11091 - 06/23/2009
- poetry does not always rhyme...prose poetry almost never rhymes....my poetry tends to mix and match styles, using haiku, prose, sometimes even ranging into couplet verses...
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- popsinger102 - 06/13/2009
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well if you really want some cc from me
is it not supposed to ryme? - Report As Spam