Bitter

• Artist: ominousblack11
• Description: Death kills you but love reborns you.
• Date: 06/07/2009
• Tags: bitter

Bitter,
Such a small word,
Yet a strong feeling it is.

First,
It starts out small,
Then grows with an intesity not matched.

You
think nothing at first,
Then are thrown into a deep despair.

Death
can create this feeling,
so pationate does this feeling seem.

Then,
all of the sudden,
You rejoice at a thought, a realization.

You
soon find that soon,
so soon, you will be rejoined.

Joyous,
such a small word,
yet a strong feeling it is.

Comments

[DeterminedLittleDreamer]

good, but a bit disjointed, if that's the effect you're aiming at, but smooth it out juuuuust a tad. But the ideas were great biggrin