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If only you knew how I cared about you,
how would you feel?
This form of heavenly inbodyment,
or a sinful ordeal?
This need to know you,
this crave of expression,
this form of wanting,
this feeling of wanting you in my possession.
This urge of making you happy,
To make you smile and laugh,
two sides that want you,
and cuts me in half.
I Imagine you all the time,
I dream of you in my sleep,
I stand in one spot,
hoping you make the leap.
I have this feeling,
of wanting to see you.
but what is in your mind?
what would you see true?
What if I were telling you the truth,
that I have this feeling.
What sort of action will you take,
and what will you find appealing?
I am not saying that I LOVE you,
that is way-to-much.
but I do like the person that you are,
and I belive it such.
I wish we can be together,
That would be a dream come true.
It's all up to you,
but If only you knew how I cared about you.
- Title: If only you knew
- Artist: elrre
- Description: This is a poem I made for someone I know, but I want your oppinions on it.
- Date: 06/07/2009
- Tags: only knew
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Spontaneously Spazgasmic - 12/13/2009
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Beautiful and very heart felt!!!
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- iCrazy14 - 06/12/2009
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i loved it it was awesome u make money for this
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- Spicesayy - 06/10/2009
- this is really good...extra bonus cookie for rhyming well
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- sydcole - 06/07/2009
- I freakin love it... ok do me a favor read mine and comment rate etc.. please. Im planning on writing songs for ppl.
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