Unnamed

• Artist: Inosuke_Kurasaki
• Description: Well if you've read my other submissions it's kinda dark and emotional
• Date: 06/08/2009
• Tags: unnamed dark emotional

Doors slam, chains rattle
You win the war, you lose the battle
Ice cracks, dogs bark
Tires screech, the fire sparks
Lights blink, the wind blows
You fake a grin, the sadness shows
The knife cuts, trees fall
One last tear completes the call
Twigs break, rain drops
Heart's bleed they'll never stop
Needles scratch, grass gets long
Drops of blood echo the beat of the song
The clocks ticks, the hour strikes
Kids whine, Parents fight
The moon hides, the blood drips
Now that she's gone, the broken heart rips
Nails on a chalkboard, teeth grind
You're all alone, with no one left to find
You grab the gun, give the world one last kiss
Thunder crashes, with no one left to miss
Cookies crumble, rules bend
A lightning flash, the world will end
Tears fall, you hate good byes
You can't hold on, so you just die

Comments

[neon_splatter]

i <3 it thast really cool u are really talented
o and it is dark and emotive
P.s GOOD LUCK XD
;D

[Serris94]

the imagery, the voice, it beckons to me, makes me sad. it is very beautiful

[onionio]

The rhythm is off in a few places but overall this is well written and deserves five stars.