Three Words

• Artist: -xXxShatteredxXxMindxXx-
• Description:
• Date: 06/09/2009
• Tags: three words

don't care.
let me be.
forget everything.
don't remember the memories.
live your life.
how you want.
i'll mess myself up.
now that you're gone.
you said you don't care.
let's see if that's true.
how long can you watch.
what i'll put myself through?
you helped keep me together.
stopped me from those things.
but now that you don't care.
i'm finally free.
i'll forget every promise.
that to you i made.
those ''terrible'' things.
i'll start up again.
do you truly not care?
or were you trying to be strong?
how will you feel.
when you see all the wrong.
the wrong that i'm doing.
now that you don't care.
those three fatal words.
have me pulling out hair.
forget every promise.
that to you i have made.
those promises die.
they have finally decayed.
when you said you don't care.
let's see if it's true.
you said you don't care.
i'll make you regret who you said those words to.

Comments

[Rina176]

A sec there I also though it was a love poem XD
Is rly good, I luv it biggrin keep it up -^_^-

[Alibis of the Heart]

Wow, this is great. I thought it really was a love poem for a bit, because it reminded me of a girl I once knew....
Great Job! 5/5
Btw, if it's not too much to ask, could you please take a look at some of my stuff, I'd like your opinion. Thanks smile

[DeC0de_M3]

this is amazing. you wrote it as a poem to your friend but others can depict this as a love poem too. it's a great emotional poem. it's amazing and i'm faving it :3

[PikaPowerx3]

This is so strong and powerful, I absolutely love it. It may not be a love poem but everyone can take their own meaning from it. 5/5 =]

[-xXxShatteredxXxMindxXx-]

it's actually not a love poem. it's about me &my friend.

[Greeneroo]

Even though this is most likely a "love" poem, it reminds me of something my friend and I are going through...