the life they dont see

• Artist: Insanitys Love
• Description: a poem that tells the truth
• Date: 06/11/2009
• Tags: life they dont darkness truth

darkness is everywhere yet everyone claims their good yet their souls hearts are pitch black they say they mean no harm but when your back is turned they'll drug your drink and leave you for less people say that they will never leave you but 3 months later they don't even remember you.

Comments

[Insanitys Love]

this is the shorter verison the longer one ill post later but plz rate and comment fairly

[PhallicCake]

I really like the poem, but maybe you should divide it up into a few lined up parts to help the reader focus better. but you did a good job! ^^