Love Hurts

• Artist: wittle_random
• Description: Sorry you guys if all my poetry seems to be about love and hurt, or something around there. Just some old stuff i had, and some new ones.
• Date: 06/12/2009
• Tags: love hurts

I thought love was non-existent
and I still do
Most of the time it just seems to end up breaking you
and we try so hard to figure this out?

Comments

[pink Maylin]

lame thats how i feel this peom is sorry

[xxxemokittyskittlesxxx]

its short...and not much meaning. 2/5

[E d i b l e F l o w e r]

I love the last line, the way it changes and steps back from what is potentially a cliche and melodramatic theme, to add a deeper touching spin.

All in all, nice.

[x_lilly rocks_x]

figire wat out!