Random Poems

• Artist: WorIds
• Description: just random stuff i wrote and one i read in my language arts class throughout 8th grade.......enjoy!^_^
• Date: 06/13/2009
• Tags: random poems

Number 1:

There once was a boy named Tim
Whose father never taught him to swim.
One day he fell off a dock
And sunk like a rock
And that was the end of him.

Number 2:

Aimee is a stupid a**
She failed in every class.
One day her heart tore
Because of Nikki she cries no more
Because her heart was dropped and shattered like glass.


Number 3:


The best part
about standing in the rain
is you can hide your tears
as you strength crumbles and washes away,
the water can hide your pain.
The best part about a closed bedroom door
is you can hide the knife
as you plunge it into your chest
and let the blood flow out
and it ends your life.

Number 4:

Tears burn my skin as they drip
down and off my face...
so I cry more.
I can't stop anyway.
Blood tingles as it falls off the tips
of my fingers and to the floor...
...Soon I'll be no more.

Number 5:

Slit my wrists and let me bleed
let me cry,let me die.
Let me fall to the bottom of the Abyss
that swallows me whole,kills me fast inside.
I love the thought of suicide.
I want life to be over for me.
I'm giving up,giving in.
But at least I tried.


~Aimee various dates~



~END~

Comments

[WorIds]

thanx for the comments,and to raindrop,i know it has a weird flow,but all of my work flows very strangely,which is y it's usually so eccentric ^^

[Taste of a Raindrop]

Whew. These poems bleed pain. First of all, and I meant to add this with your poem about Nikki. If you have lines that rhyme with each other, they have to have the same number of beats, aka syllables. Example: See spot run/into the sun. This doesn't flow. It should be See spot run/to the sun. It will flow better and sound better if you write in meter. Collectively, I will give your poetry 4 stars.

[scitama]

These are excellent. I especially love the concept of #3 and how you wrote it.Very nicely done! Write more!

[sexy-RAWRZ-ya]

DAMN AIMS! i like # 1