Games.

• Artist: Stellzie
• Description: Writing things down always makes me feel better.
• Date: 06/17/2009
• Tags: games

jupiter,saturn,venus or mars.
i don't care where you go as long as it's far.
you broke this heart of mine,and know it feels sad,
but what hurts even more is to think of what we once had.
you can live among the stars,or build a house on the moon
i don't care where you go,as long as you'll leave soon.
the nights seem much longer,and the days are looking blue.
but what kills me the most,is knowing that you once loved me too.
oh yes,cupid hit me.it's true love is blind,
but would i be able to see,as you played games with my mind?

Comments

[Stellzie]

Thanks Fallen,I do agree at some point, I'll work that next time. (: And silverClan,thank you for the support,I do believe so too! <3

[SilverClan_Rainstar]

It was just fine! It strikes a chord. I think it was amazing. Some of us can relate to it and that's also what makes it great. Keep writing!

[Fallen_Sweetly]

The cadence is a little off, but you do have a structured rhyme scheme. I'm glad you enjoy poetry. :]