your last sunrise

• Artist: NovaEaston
• Description: about me and my aunt having the time of our lives
• Date: 06/18/2009
• Tags: your last sunrise

as the cirens blows i clutch my heart knowing ill never see you again

(story line) were having fun together living

life to the fullest i said ill see you tomarrow

she said ill wait for you and the next morning shes very sick

i wisper in her ear your tough you can make it through anything

you always do but that day ways your last sun rise

and i wake up to find you dead we call 911 and the cirens blow down the street

i fall to my knees clutching my heart knowing ill never see you again

you lied you said youll wait for me and the salty tears fall down my face

and i say i cant make it without you

Comments

[Punk Fox TH]

Besides the already mentioned grammar, you don't have any attempt at meter here. Perhaps take a lesson or two in poetry and try again?

[volleyballpixie7]

i like it

[ABluejay]

hmm touching but I feel like a a** for mentioning the persistent grammar mistakes and lack of punctuation my friend.