It's You

• Artist: Rayne Engel
• Description: This is a poem with all endings rhyming with 'you'. I wrote this at one in the morning, so... yeah. I know it's short, but it has a lot of meaning. I added a picture to accompany it, too.
  Just for a quicky: [i]false rue[/i]- slender erect perennial of eastern North America having tuberous roots and pink-tinged white flowers
• Date: 06/18/2009
• Tags: love poem xxxwerewolfvampirexxx

Where are you?
There's nothing left to do.
Trying to find you.
It's starting to come into view,
As I run after you.

And the skies are so blue.
It's bleak beauty breaking though,
Telling me what to say on cue.
But never as beautiful as you.
What I say is so true.

When the morning dew,
Settles on the false rue
I knew,
This was the end of me and you.
Such a sad thing to live up to.

And i never knew,
That it was truly you.
That cause me to write of my blues.
A sadness that grew
Until it dawned on me that you,

Never even really cared......

Comments

[Rayne Engel]

oh, and no i dont know that song. I'll look it up some time.

[Rayne Engel]

I'm adding a lot more of my work, when i can find them... =D

[Kento Yamaguchi]

I like it, I'll five it.
I see potential in your work,
keep it up and never forget to challenge yourself.
Don't simply settle for good if you can always get better.

[racket444]

sorry. forgot to add this in the first comment, but if you have ever heard the song "Our God" by Cross Movement the meter or rythem, or whatever of the first part of the song's body is what I was reading this too. lol

[racket444]

Wow. This is really good. I like it bunches. I think it sounds good as a rap too. XD

[Rayne Engel]

Thank you. I still think your stuff is better. It's rare when I can write like this.

[DlEBOUTONNER]

OMG ur good