~ S i l v e r ~ R a i n ~

• Artist: Eternia Rose
• Description: A poem I did for school.
• Date: 06/19/2009
• Tags: silver rain onomatopoeia school poem

~ SILVER RAIN ~

Drip, drip
Upon my shattered window
Wink, wink
Silver rain falls unto my shadow

Plump, plump
The rapid sound behind my chest
Yawn, yawn
For I am tired of this mortal rest

Tick, tock
My time is soon to come
Lick, lick
Along the wound my tongue runs

Ring, ring
There you linger in the doorway
Splash, splash
Into my rainbow puddle of May

Tap, tap
A smile upon my emerald eyes
Giggle, giggle
Death is nothing with you and I

Comments

[Nerdy_Haruhi]

Hmm the repetitiveness makes this feel like a children's poem but the meaning is meant for older minds. 5 stars for something i havent seen on here. biggrin