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I hit the soft cushion,
that only immediately to be followed by a sharp pain in my leg.
I protect my face with my arms and there is the sound of a snap,
the pain in my back unbearable.
I couldn't breath, for the pain had a tight grip of my body.
Snap.
Another sharp pain in my left arm that is protecting my face.
I peak, only to see the one who gave birth to me.
Snap.
My leg again.
Then, the world goes blurry, it was as if being pulled under water.
I blink,
and the world is clear again.
There's a few more snaps.
Now my stomach is burning.
The sound of stomping fills my ears, and then the slamming of a door.
Those sounds were the sign of the end of my punishment.
- by Nyx Twilight Moon |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/22/2009 |
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- Title: Punishment
- Artist: Nyx Twilight Moon
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Description:
This is a poem, that was inspired by my story I also entered it:
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/non-fiction/vote/?entry_id=101479991#title
Please take a look. I know I'm not a great writer, but I tried. - Date: 06/22/2009
- Tags: punishment
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Comments (3 Comments)
- XxGory GordyxX - 06/27/2009
- Wow it's like the step mother seen in the book im wrighting...
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- bubashubalub - 06/23/2009
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i thought that was a great poem i hope you get even better
i think you should be more subtle
i hope this poem has no inspiration from your real life - Report As Spam
- Nyx Twilight Moon - 06/23/2009
- Please comment sad
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