Will You Be My Friend?

• Artist: DehHiddenAngel
• Description: This is just another one of my poems, i liked this one, along with all my others, i hope you do to!! Comment if you liked it, or have any advice, but please, nothing rude!
• Date: 06/26/2009
• Tags: will friend

I’m afraid to open my eyes

What will I see?

Will you be my eyes today?

To help me through the day


I’m afraid to walk forward

Will I ever trip, or make it to the end?

Will you be my feet today?

Or catch me if I fall


I’m afraid to listen to the sounds

What will I hear?

Will you be my ears today?

I need all my fears to be taken away

I need you to guide me along life

I need you by my side

Through the rainy days

I trust you’d be the friend

Who will help me to the end…..

Comments

[Taste of a Raindrop]

This is pretty good! ^_^
And thank you for your comment about my poem, I'm glad you liked it.

I'm not sure what to give you. Because I would give you a 4.5. Hmm. Oh, I'll just give you a 5/5 razz

[DehHiddenAngel]

haha...i was randomly rating and verything and i came upon my own...i likes it...5's!!!!...lawl...

[StealinYourName]

i love it ^^ 5/5

[Brok3n_H3art33]

I wont say anything rude, it's really good. 5/5