3 Chances

• Artist: DehHiddenAngel
• Description: This is about a girl who only gives guys 3 chances to break er heart and so the first time she was so hurt she ran away, the 2nd time she cried a long time and didn't want to be with him again, and the 3rd time she was so hurt and mad with him she wanted to hit him with omthing and dart ryhmed with heart so...haha...then at the end she says no get out...like almost she way saying 3 strikes your out but in other words....XD..hope you like it!!!
• Date: 06/27/2009
• Tags: chances

In a baseball game you only get 3 strikes

In my mind you only get 3 chances......


I walk along the desert floor

I walk through that empty door

Don't fight with me

I can't let this be.....




That first day you broke my heart

I broke into a run

I got a big head start

I was running to the sun



The second day you broke my heart

I cried alone in my room

I think we should be apart

This relationship is doomed


The thrid time you broke my heart

I have had enough

I wanted to hit you with a dart

i never knew love was so tough



I won't give you another chance

So stop doing that rouitned dance

No begging or crying

I've seen it all before

Stop what your doing right now

And just walk out that door

Comments

[Taste of a Raindrop]

Hmm...

This is an interesting poem. I like it. However, if you're going to rhyme, all of the lines that rhyme have to be in the same meter. You can't have: See spot run out of the hot sun because it doesn't flow. Something like See spot run in the sun flows better and works metrically. Good job. Also, it's not dessert, it's desert. razz